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151: Interaction.

Author: Gonshido Word Count: 2744 Updated: 2025-04-05 17:17:22

Interaction.

Hello.0

This is your regular or fairly irregular dose of Interaction Chapter.

I am currently in writer's block or something as I cannot figure out how to move forward after the mental outburst of Shido at the reunion party. Should I show the reactions of Fuyumi, Iwao, and Twice or just directly move ahead with the story?

This is the dilemma I am in... Do I focus on the story and make it move fast or should I work on the story to make it more refined (Like having paragraphs about the character's view on the situation)?

I earlier announced that I wanted to move to the canon with the [The Rise of V's] arc but the current scenario is taking too long.

(Before someone says that the whole reunion part was useless, I would like to point out that Isao is an important character for the next two arcs, and the reunion party was the aptest entry into the story that I could think of).

And then there is this problem of how the influence of [Law of Chaos] on Shido's mind will change the dynamics of the Shido x Fuyumi Relationship.

I think I would need a bit more time to consider every character and make a plotline out of it. Bending a character's will or making them act out of character just so it becomes convenient for MC is something I am really bad at. (Like it's not a bad thing to make the characters act in such a way that it is more convenient for MC, but every time I tried to do that, I've failed hard).

Thanks for reading!

Possibilities for Plotline (08/18/2022)

--Fuyumi cries every night helplessly as she sees him sleep peacefully beside him. ***** (Bad but more effect)

--Fuyumi tries to help him to overcome the effect of the law. ** (Don't know how she will help... Need to make some SOP to reduce law's effect).

--Fuyumi leaves him after blaming herself for the mental outburst at the reunion. * (Completely out of her character)

--Fuyumi and Shido erupt into a verbal fight which leads to Fuyumi calling him 'mentally ill' and 'murderer'. ***** (Readers won't like it but more effective as they try to mend their relation)

--Eri and Himiko are terrified of Shido after he scolds them under the influence of law. ** (Personally don't like this but goes along with Shido and Fuyumi's fight)

--Shido uses [Mind Stabilizer] to control the influence but this distances him from the family. *** (Slight dislike but visible progress)

--Slow character progress for Shido as he fights the influence. *** (Readers might like this)

Notes for fic:

--One Liners

--Less killings and more recurring characters

--Find a new name for Isao's corporation

--Add more substance to Isao's purpose to make it seem more plausible.

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